Hola Mis Estudiantes.

I'm going to simplify this emailing out points thing here (simplify for me, that is, at least at this stage). Below is a table of everyone's points for peer review fest, other stuff, attendance, free writes, a total, and a number, one of which is your lucky number! (maybe.) in a minute i'll email you individually and tell you which number is yours.

These scores include *almost* all of this work. It doesn't include things you've emailed me or most of what you've turned in this week. I will finish that soon, but for the moment, I don't want to risk my head exploding (i'm sure you can relate) and must take a break.

Shortly I will also send you your scores with paper scores and stuff, and then the final with the persuasive score included sometime next week.

Here's a quick summary of things to do if you want more points:

1. Critical Thinking assignment - http://www.uoflife.com/uvsc/critthinkassign.htm
2. Logical Fallacy assignment - http://www.uoflife.com/uvsc/fallacies.htm
3. The 1 page single spaced analytical essay things in the syllabus (okay, some of you have lost this, or had it stolen, so I'll add it in below) - note that the syllabus says "1.5 pages". Ignore that and go with the "1 page" in this email.
4. Freewrites are still accepted for this week and next (and you may turn in next week's early if you like). 3 pages per week.

These points still don't reflect:
* library assignment 10 points
* most of this week's freewrites, as mentioned
* assignments only turned in via email.

Important Announcement (in case you didn't know): NO CLASS FRIDAY. It's a reading day thing and UVSC typically doesn't hold class then.

Important Announcement #2 (in case you've missed the last couple class periods): If you haven't/don't have plans to given me a copy of your persuasive paper with all identifying info removed (your name, my name, the section, the course #) and/or if you didn't pick up one of those cover sheets to staple to it, or if you did but lost it or it was stolen, here's what you do:

1. If you have the sheet and paper, either bring it to my class tomorrow and drop it off (LA 023 @ 10) or

2. drop it off in the English Department Big Wooden Box (LA main floor) WITH either a post it note with my name and yours on it OR another cover sheet above the cover sheet you got with our names on it (so it will reach my box and i'll know whose it is but can then tear that sheet off and deliver it anonymously).

3. Drop it off at least by Monday at 11:00 a.m.

4. IF YOU DON"T HAVE A COVER SHEET then just add a cover sheet with our names and I'll take care of it.

Good luck to everyone on all your finals. It's been fun and I think you're great.

Shaun

P.S. Don't be alarmed if you earned some "other" points and don't see them there, because they probably just got added to the peer review fest section, but you certainly may point if out to me if you're concerned.

Updated table Sunday 11:20 a.m.
Average P&P total: 198. High P&P score: 364

participation & preparation, your #, purpose and audience paper, barriers, multi-skill, final, total points (w/o persuasive, redo's, star points, and a few ID/mind reading essays...does include all emailed freewrites)

P&P

1

P/A

Bar

MS

Final

Total

200.2

2

65

27

96

388

189.4

3

78

*

100

*

0

367

108.4

4

0

1L

92

*

0

200

154.6

5

77

53

121

406

252.2

6

91

90

150

*

583

180

7

21

55

116

50

422

201.8

8

87

*

77

88

454

233.2

9

83

60

119

495

245.2

10

82

76

109

512

124

11

93

* .5L

0

0

217

301.4

12

90

36

125

552

98.8

13

0

0

0

99

56.8

14

78

0

0

135

307.2

15

88

100

*

140

*

635

148.4

16

83

0

0

231

250.6

17

82

84

125

542

82.8

18

90

0

0

173

163.2

19

0

0

0

163

143.4

20

72

0

0

215

249.4

21

92

88

*

143

572

105

22

0

77

132

314

212.8

23

0

42

112

367

290.2

24

75

90

145

*

600

25

0

0

0

26

0

0

0

0

P&P

P/A

Bar

MS

Final

Total

315.3

28

66

67

145

593

212.4

29

47

1L

57

147

*

463

119.1

30

94

0

132

*

345

306.1

31

91

83

150

*

630

253.7

32

56

50

150

510

126.3

33

84

73

143

*

426

5.1

34

0

0

0

5.1

245

35

84

*

61

143

*

533

246.5

36

0

75

113

*

435

287.2

37

97

83

150

*

617

190

38

75

75

0

340

306

39

65

92

142

605

275.1

40

63

54

114

506

267.5

41

25

0

90

383

318.6

42

32

redo

81

150

582

271.8

43

78

72

137

559

212.5

44

96

86

132

527

5.1

45

0

0

0

5.1

206

46

71

1L

0

0

277

246.6

47

90

84

117

*

538

372

48

78

80

86

616

215.6

49

93

*

94

149

*

552

295.6

50

0

0

150

*

446

51

0

0

0

52

0

53

0

P&P

P/A

Bar

MS

Final

Total

330.9

55

87

100

*

145

663

248

56

97

*

58

150

*

553

208

57

69

100

*

150

*

527

143.5

58

92

51

122

*?

409

145.3

59

63

51

106

*

365

179

60

89

91

125

484

266

61

96

37

110

509

99.7

62

78

0

122

300

54.4

63

0

0

0

54

256.8

64

77

redo

99

*

145

*

578

65

0

212.3

66

91

93

128

*

524

231.2

67

95

29

140

*

495

215.9

68

82

49

137

*

484

290.9

69

100

*

94

*

120

*

605

143.1

70

95

97

*

0

335

247.8

71

43

65

139

*

495

48.5

72

87

1L?

44

0

180

165.2

73

100

*

83

0

348

210.5

74

66

60

141

478

250.7

75

92

95

*

0

438

156.3

76

66

redo *

100

*

0

322

16.4

77

0

0

0

16

78

83

0

0

83

P&P

P/A

Bar

MS

Final

Total

143

80

100

*

89

*

150

*

482

178

81

89

77

124

468

257

82

83

81

130

551

364

83

80

*

67

142

*

653

38

84

0

0

0

38

207

85

100

*

51

128

486

8

86

0

0

0

8

285

87

100

*

81

150

*

616

251

88

92

72

*

115

530

49

89

0

0

0

49

166

90

81

*

0

133

*

380

336

91

90

79

142

647

54

92

0

57

0

111

272

93

93

*

87

145

597

143

94

0

52

135

*

330

76

95

98

*

0

0

174

182

96

97

*

0

P

125

404

206

97

82

*

58

96

442

235

98

86

83

146

550

222

99

83

*

0

125

430

216

100

92

79

145

532

240

101

96

*

91

*

140

*

567

89

102

78

53

0

220

206

103

97

*

100

*

129

532

197.46

68

55.5

96.06

412

last column = averages

1 page in-depth essay info from syllabus:

___1.5 page single spaced In-Depth essays:

- Evaluate your strengths – propone them. Defend. Advocate. Sell yourself. Choose a specific audience.

- Explain a personal goal, really sell its value with examples and deep analysis, and describe specific steps to reach it.

- anything else along these lines, like the topics for our last two class discussions - identity, judging, connecting/eye reading, critical thinking, emotional thinking, etc.

 

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